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Behind the Scenes

From screenplay to vision – the journey of a fan-made Star Wars story.

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The story sparked with a single question...

What is the core of Star Wars?

Is it the Jedi?

Lightsabers?

The Force?

Or something deeper?

Perhaps, the answer lies at the very beginning...

A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away....

Star Wars is a legend, a fairytale.

Once upon a time... in space.

Over the next several months, I wrote a 110-page feature screenplay—the Star Wars movie I always wanted to see: a brand-new era,

with original characters and a completely fresh story... that rhymes.

The script went on to place in several prestigious screenwriting competitions and even won the Chicago Screenwriting Network holiday contest—earning a theatrical table read, performed by actors in front of a live audience.

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Meanwhile, I scoured the outer reaches of the Star Wars fandom, searching for talented concept artists who shared the same passion for Star Wars and storytelling.

That search ultimately led me to two extraordinary artists.

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"Always two there are, no more, no less."

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Justin Spice

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At last, it was time to take the project to the next level—

to fully realize my vision for a new Star Wars movie.

That’s when I began searching for storyboard artists.

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Rick Troula

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Rick and I agreed to join forces on what was going to become one of the longest, most challenging creative projects of my life.

We began working together on new concept art.

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We knew we wanted something dark, futuristic and samurai.

It was time to start storyboarding.

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We spent years breaking down the script shot by shot—

starting from page one and ultimately creating over 400 storyboards for just the first half of the movie.

Throughout this process we took our favorites scenes and further developed them in color and more detail.

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We also got some help from another one of my favorite artists.

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Jurnee Molson

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What I Learned

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As a still-fresh screenwriter, this project was a crash course in everything from storytelling structure to creative collaboration. Writing my first feature-length screenplay—especially one set in a galaxy as iconic as Star Wars—taught me the value of simplicity and clarity in storytelling. Screenwriting, I’ve come to learn, is often the art of saying more with less.

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One of the biggest lessons came through working with concept artists from all over the world. Collaborating across time zones, cultures, and languages forced me to become sharper and more intentional in how I communicated.

It pushed me to be more precise in my writing—not just for the script itself,

but in how I described a scene, a character, or a feeling to someone else tasked with bringing it to life.

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I also began to think more visually. Knowing that these ideas would eventually be interpreted by other artists helped me better “see” my scenes cinematically. I became more aware of how my characters moved through their environments—and how those environments could shift in tone and emotion. Every piece of concept art, every storyboard panel,

helped me hone that sense of visual storytelling.

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Looking back, this was more than a writing exercise—it was a hands-on journey in directing, producing, and creative leadership. I wore every hat: writer, creative director, project lead, even producer. And while I often wished I had a whole team of Disney’s best and brightest by my side,

we did what we could with limited resources and a whole lot of passion.

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In the end, I got to make something fun—a Star Wars movie for me.

It’s the kind of project 10-year-old Donny would’ve dreamed about making. And while I’ve grown a lot since then (and yes, part of me still wants to keep revising this story forever), I’m proud of what we created.

How You Can Help

1.  Tell Disney to make this movie!

Let them know you want to see Eclipse of the Mind brought to life.

2.  Support my work on Patreon.

Your support helps me create more fun, original stories in the future.

3.  Follow, share, and engage.

Every like, comment, and share helps this project reach more fans.

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